Why are you so aggressively determined to ruin my sleep schedule by being one of the best character writers I've ever seen, period, let alone for 18+ visual novels I play before bed?
Between this and A New Dawn, you're one of a scarce few writers that makes me feel like Ren'Py can be pushed beyond the limits of what it seems like on the tin. I look forward to playing your games so much that I unironically dropped a reflexive "Let's gooooo!" OUT LOUD when I saw the update pop up in my feed. THAT'S how good this shit is.
First thing I noticed was the name Thessalia (best Varrock NPC) but it is a name that could have been used elsewhere so that might be a coincidence as well as the mention of Herblore since I don't see that used too often.
When I saw the drink names that was the dead giveaway/reference haha.
Fun fact: I have never played Tetris before the minigame in this VN. I booted up the game because I already knew it was gold, and my save was at the minigame.
I just spent three hours learning how to actually play Tetris because I wanted to see more of the godlike dialogue writing in this game. 11/10
What a good game but I need to now what is the song that is played in the gym I looked at the website but I can't find it please if someone can help me I would be really glad
I can't believe you made another amazing VA after Dawn! This one was much shorter but it seems like you plan on extending it with further episodes. I absolutely love your work and can't wait for the next part!
I wasn't expecting you to top Dawn with such a short VN, especially featuring a character I had almost no connection with, but somehow you did it. Hanging out with virtual Roxie and talking about stuff almost was more fun than eventually getting to the "good part". Came for the action (again), stayed for the character.
Seriously, I haven't met any person who was able to get me that invested with what is basically fan fiction. Really really looking forward to what you have in store with Shauntal!
Hey VNAnon, I'm curious about something. Lately, there have been rumors that Gamefreak may actually be working on Pokemon Black 3 & White 3. Which if true, most likely means that there will be a new male and a new female protagonist for the games. So if all of this is true and happens, would you add the new female protagonist to the game alongside Hilda and Rosa? And on that note, would you also consider adding any attractive female characters that are new from this potential Black 3 & White 3? In general, I'm just wondering what your opinion on this is and what you would do if Pokemon Black 3 & White 3 actually happened. So, your thoughts?
This was so good that I made an account on itch.io just to compliment it, Like man, that was the sweetest and most wholesome stuff I've seen followed by some of the hottest stuff I've scene. massive props that was amazing, the art was great, the dialogue was great, and the tetris was great, thank you for adding tetris, I like tetris. I am very excited for your next work and I also realized you made "A New Dawn", a game I will surely check out later, great stuff, excited for more. also is there more dialogue depending on your tetris score? I got 4000 the first time cause I was not in my element followed by 40000 afterwards, I noticed there's different dialogue for each so I was wondering if I hit the best dialogue or if I need to go further. great game, yes I will say it again, I will watch over your future endeavors with great excitement, thank you.
i was just tryna find something to pass the time because I can't sleep and honestly this was way more of a gem than it needed to be big props on the story ngl (also art was amazing too)
I think ive been trolled by the last image on the blog thing with Hilda and Rosa. I would assume that the other two clickable things on the map are just red herrings?
Those were actually just me playing with things and I forgot to remove them. I have a rough idea of a hilda and rosa thing but for now they just show up in A New Dawn.
Well, dang. Ah well. Best of luck for the new update- hopefully it wont be like the current state of Terraria mods (i love your work, and take your time)
What I expected it to be: A small game with a simple story, if any at all.
What I got: A game with very nice art, and a genuinely good story that started off simple but gradually evolved into something much more, and genuinely left me quite upset when it abruptly ended right as it started getting real good.
In the short time that I played this I've grown attached to Roxie and would love a continuation of her story, even though I know that'll never happen.
Hey, there's nothing to be sorry about! That just means you made a great game, and I'm surely looking forward to more in the future! (Assuming there will be more) ^^"
Honestly, pretty damn good. Sure, I was drawn in by the adult tag, but after playing it, it falls into that special category of "VNs I like even without the porn". I shall watch your future endeavors with great interest.
Downloaded for the porn, stayed for the incredible characterization, immersive worldbuilding, engaging dialogue, and commentary on passion and purpose that made me feel directly targeted as an individual. 11/10, if you're scrolling down to the comments to see if you'll like the game, you will.
I had a crush on Roxie my first playthrough when I was around 8-11, after playing this it feels like I've finished a small chapter of my childhood. On the same day I get excepted to my dream college no less.
Thanks game devs, I hope you have nothing but good days, and that you tell everything else to f off.
I was a really good visual novel. Love the references to the other regions and It's great that we can hear more about Roxie. Can't wait for the story with Hilda and Rosa.
One thing I hope you consider is possibly doing mini-episodes with Roxie or whatever character in the future when you drop a new chapter. Something just short, sweet, maybe to the point or something romantic. Would be a shame if that was the last we see of Roxie, or even Dawn.
Off to a great start. Episode One may have been a tad on the short side, but it was full of cute moments and the connection between Roxie and the player character felt really genuine. Can't wait for more! But man, fuck Porygon Pileup. Goddamn line pieces never showin' up when I need 'em.
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Got to the end on android worked perfectly fine
Nice
Why are you so aggressively determined to ruin my sleep schedule by being one of the best character writers I've ever seen, period, let alone for 18+ visual novels I play before bed?
Between this and A New Dawn, you're one of a scarce few writers that makes me feel like Ren'Py can be pushed beyond the limits of what it seems like on the tin. I look forward to playing your games so much that I unironically dropped a reflexive "Let's gooooo!" OUT LOUD when I saw the update pop up in my feed. THAT'S how good this shit is.
12/10 keep going
Only 12? Dang sorry next game cancelled
HOLYSHIT EP 2!
Can't believe is out letsgoooo
Great work, these are super fun
Thank you for doing my favorite gen 5 girl it was a fun story/game.
Fellow scaper? :)
Hah, yeah. What gave it away?
First thing I noticed was the name Thessalia (best Varrock NPC) but it is a name that could have been used elsewhere so that might be a coincidence as well as the mention of Herblore since I don't see that used too often.
When I saw the drink names that was the dead giveaway/reference haha.
Yeah there's a few things sprinkled in there. Someone stole 500m from me last year so I haven't played since.
What are the controls for tetris here?
Should just be arrow keys I think. Just press random buttons until it works.
That's what I was doing, but iirc I had trouble rotating the pieces. Is that the up and down buttons?
Yeah up arrow rotates, down arrow speeds it up.
…God damn it. Ah well, will do that tonight.
…so uh, will there be impreg?
Probably not sorry <_<
about to try the new update im exited but random side note where do the get the music from the bar in chapter 1 its fire
https://www.fesliyanstudios.com/royalty-free-music/download/anger/495
I regularly indulge in visual novels. This one's still amazing.
I rarely indulge in visual novels. This one's amazing.
Nice, thanks bud :>
Will there be impreg?
Can I have free robux
sure
The Tetris minigame is broken on android, there's no way to move the pieces besides rotating them
Can't really help with that unfortunately, I have no ability to test for android.
Understandable, at the end it really didn't impact getting the best ending.
Also, both of your VNs were genuinely good, really looking forward to Episode 2 on this one, take all the time you need to drop it.
Fun fact: I have never played Tetris before the minigame in this VN. I booted up the game because I already knew it was gold, and my save was at the minigame.
I just spent three hours learning how to actually play Tetris because I wanted to see more of the godlike dialogue writing in this game. 11/10
Damn i just realized u the one who created the "A New Dawn" too I'm definitely tryin this game man
Typo during hot dog scene. I've barely had a second to pause and consider how ATTACTED I am to her.
Followed by "lavendar" instead of "lavender".
Sorry game sucks
Bahahahaha. Jokes aside, I truly enjoyed this one. Far more than I expected. You've done a fantastic job.
What a good game but I need to now what is the song that is played in the gym I looked at the website but I can't find it please if someone can help me I would be really glad
When you're approaching the gym, or the background one when you're talking to roxie?
When you talking to her
https://www.fesliyanstudios.com/royalty-free-music/download/anger/495
Thank you so much!!!
I can't believe you made another amazing VA after Dawn! This one was much shorter but it seems like you plan on extending it with further episodes. I absolutely love your work and can't wait for the next part!
peak
pretty cute.
More than half of what is in the images in itch is not in the game
Yep, it's in development.
I wasn't expecting you to top Dawn with such a short VN, especially featuring a character I had almost no connection with, but somehow you did it. Hanging out with virtual Roxie and talking about stuff almost was more fun than eventually getting to the "good part". Came for the action (again), stayed for the character.
Seriously, I haven't met any person who was able to get me that invested with what is basically fan fiction. Really really looking forward to what you have in store with Shauntal!
Roxie isn't virtual she is real and she is my girlfriend
Hey VNAnon, I'm curious about something. Lately, there have been rumors that Gamefreak may actually be working on Pokemon Black 3 & White 3. Which if true, most likely means that there will be a new male and a new female protagonist for the games. So if all of this is true and happens, would you add the new female protagonist to the game alongside Hilda and Rosa? And on that note, would you also consider adding any attractive female characters that are new from this potential Black 3 & White 3? In general, I'm just wondering what your opinion on this is and what you would do if Pokemon Black 3 & White 3 actually happened. So, your thoughts?
Well I'll need to see the characters first. Who knows what cutie pies await us?
i cant put into words how i feel
i got fuckin tears in my eyes i just feel hollow
roxies talk on the pier was so much man i came here to look at some boobs cause im a shallow motherfucker i just feel sad
like ive been told i need to get up from the dirt floor that is my life and that there is hope
I believe in you, friend :>
Seriously one of the most adorable games i have played keep up the good work
Thanks best friend :D
This was so good that I made an account on itch.io just to compliment it, Like man, that was the sweetest and most wholesome stuff I've seen followed by some of the hottest stuff I've scene. massive props that was amazing, the art was great, the dialogue was great, and the tetris was great, thank you for adding tetris, I like tetris. I am very excited for your next work and I also realized you made "A New Dawn", a game I will surely check out later, great stuff, excited for more. also is there more dialogue depending on your tetris score? I got 4000 the first time cause I was not in my element followed by 40000 afterwards, I noticed there's different dialogue for each so I was wondering if I hit the best dialogue or if I need to go further. great game, yes I will say it again, I will watch over your future endeavors with great excitement, thank you.
Wow, thanks friend <3 I think 10,000 is the highest score that has different dialogue so you got it with 40k.
A second banger and this game not even done yet
i was just tryna find something to pass the time because I can't sleep and honestly this was way more of a gem than it needed to be big props on the story ngl (also art was amazing too)
Sleep well D:
hahaahaha i try i try i promise lol
Maybe take a walk and meet a cute punk girl?
life goals right there
I think ive been trolled by the last image on the blog thing with Hilda and Rosa. I would assume that the other two clickable things on the map are just red herrings?
Those were actually just me playing with things and I forgot to remove them. I have a rough idea of a hilda and rosa thing but for now they just show up in A New Dawn.
Well, dang. Ah well. Best of luck for the new update- hopefully it wont be like the current state of Terraria mods
(i love your work, and take your time)
Isn't terraria in its 8th annual final update or something
nah, im talking about the calamity mod and the fact that the 1.4.4 update has been kicking its ass. Too complicated for my brain to comprehend
What I expected it to be: A small game with a simple story, if any at all.
What I got: A game with very nice art, and a genuinely good story that started off simple but gradually evolved into something much more, and genuinely left me quite upset when it abruptly ended right as it started getting real good.
In the short time that I played this I've grown attached to Roxie and would love a continuation of her story, even though I know that'll never happen.
Sorry to upset :c
Hey, there's nothing to be sorry about! That just means you made a great game, and I'm surely looking forward to more in the future! (Assuming there will be more) ^^"
No, episode 2 is cancelled because you made me cry
...There's no way you're serious
;____; cant hear you over my tears
Honestly, pretty damn good. Sure, I was drawn in by the adult tag, but after playing it, it falls into that special category of "VNs I like even without the porn". I shall watch your future endeavors with great interest.
Downloaded for the porn, stayed for the incredible characterization, immersive worldbuilding, engaging dialogue, and commentary on passion and purpose that made me feel directly targeted as an individual. 11/10, if you're scrolling down to the comments to see if you'll like the game, you will.
Jeez, thanks friend :>
I had a crush on Roxie my first playthrough when I was around 8-11, after playing this it feels like I've finished a small chapter of my childhood. On the same day I get excepted to my dream college no less.
Thanks game devs, I hope you have nothing but good days, and that you tell everything else to f off.
Hey, congrats friend :D
I was a really good visual novel. Love the references to the other regions and It's great that we can hear more about Roxie. Can't wait for the story with Hilda and Rosa.
Hello. I loved what I played and am wondering if you will do a full VN for Roxie in the future? Keep up the great work!
Just doing small ones for now, but nothing's impossible.
Thank you for replying. I am a big fan of Roxie. I look forward to your future works.
Very cute game. Loved the little story. Keep up the good work!
this is another master piece good job
Was very well made. How are you planning on topping Roxie though?
Idk, it's impossible.
Was fluffy, many thanks for the experience.
I'm fluffy c:
One thing I hope you consider is possibly doing mini-episodes with Roxie or whatever character in the future when you drop a new chapter. Something just short, sweet, maybe to the point or something romantic. Would be a shame if that was the last we see of Roxie, or even Dawn.
Off to a great start. Episode One may have been a tad on the short side, but it was full of cute moments and the connection between Roxie and the player character felt really genuine. Can't wait for more! But man, fuck Porygon Pileup. Goddamn line pieces never showin' up when I need 'em.
Hey, I designed and tested that brand new game and it's perfect, fuck you