I'd ask about Lenora but... yeah I understand not wanting to touch the lady associated with the mammy stereotype with a ten foot pole, even if she's cool... and she has a loving husband too unlike all the others here lmao.
I came here to thank those involved in this game, especially the scriptwriter, the game's dialogues are very cute and have a lot of personality. I also apologize for my poor English, this game and the previous one about Dawn, which I look forward to a sequel to, made me try to understand more English, which is not my Native language, I think in the end this is yet another proof of how much I admire the work of this incredible team!!!! (Ps: I would also like to say that the game's arts are very good and I love them!)
I made a account just to say that like... holy your stories, and writing skill here made me feel like I was listening to a actual conversation between 2 people, ESPECIALLY with uh... Roxie. I definitely plan to try any other games you release on here. Super excited for them as well.
just played through this last night and i blame you for the absolutely MASSIVE crush i now have on shauntal. please tell me there's more with her coming up
Shauntal episode was my favorite of your works so far, though the ending left me hoping for more. If you ever do any sort of continuation, I'd most like to see another chapter with her. In particular, the initial premise made me hope it would be both of them playing together more so, with them having lewd things build up in response to what their characters do in their game. Something that now after reading, wouldn't have felt appropriate for the current point their relationship was at, but now would. Regardless, it was cool stuff, cute story.
I stayed up over 2 hours to play through the Shauntal story, past 5 AM as I type this. Loved the story, hoped that the NSFW stuff would at least be at the level of Roxie or top it. But none of that. It was still hot and the amount of work put into this is impressive and respectable. On the horny side, it was just a bit disappointing.
This was fantastic, I loved the roleplay adventure! Shauntal is a fun character! Written well.
Though the ending was quite abrupt, it does end after the diary scene when she leaves, right? I didn't get a bad ending and am missing a bunch of stuff? That's my only real criticism, it's hard to tell.
Why are you so aggressively determined to ruin my sleep schedule by being one of the best character writers I've ever seen, period, let alone for 18+ visual novels I play before bed?
Between this and A New Dawn, you're one of a scarce few writers that makes me feel like Ren'Py can be pushed beyond the limits of what it seems like on the tin. I look forward to playing your games so much that I unironically dropped a reflexive "Let's gooooo!" OUT LOUD when I saw the update pop up in my feed. THAT'S how good this shit is.
First thing I noticed was the name Thessalia (best Varrock NPC) but it is a name that could have been used elsewhere so that might be a coincidence as well as the mention of Herblore since I don't see that used too often.
When I saw the drink names that was the dead giveaway/reference haha.
Fun fact: I have never played Tetris before the minigame in this VN. I booted up the game because I already knew it was gold, and my save was at the minigame.
I just spent three hours learning how to actually play Tetris because I wanted to see more of the godlike dialogue writing in this game. 11/10
What a good game but I need to now what is the song that is played in the gym I looked at the website but I can't find it please if someone can help me I would be really glad
I can't believe you made another amazing VA after Dawn! This one was much shorter but it seems like you plan on extending it with further episodes. I absolutely love your work and can't wait for the next part!
I wasn't expecting you to top Dawn with such a short VN, especially featuring a character I had almost no connection with, but somehow you did it. Hanging out with virtual Roxie and talking about stuff almost was more fun than eventually getting to the "good part". Came for the action (again), stayed for the character.
Seriously, I haven't met any person who was able to get me that invested with what is basically fan fiction. Really really looking forward to what you have in store with Shauntal!
Hey VNAnon, I'm curious about something. Lately, there have been rumors that Gamefreak may actually be working on Pokemon Black 3 & White 3. Which if true, most likely means that there will be a new male and a new female protagonist for the games. So if all of this is true and happens, would you add the new female protagonist to the game alongside Hilda and Rosa? And on that note, would you also consider adding any attractive female characters that are new from this potential Black 3 & White 3? In general, I'm just wondering what your opinion on this is and what you would do if Pokemon Black 3 & White 3 actually happened. So, your thoughts?
This was so good that I made an account on itch.io just to compliment it, Like man, that was the sweetest and most wholesome stuff I've seen followed by some of the hottest stuff I've scene. massive props that was amazing, the art was great, the dialogue was great, and the tetris was great, thank you for adding tetris, I like tetris. I am very excited for your next work and I also realized you made "A New Dawn", a game I will surely check out later, great stuff, excited for more. also is there more dialogue depending on your tetris score? I got 4000 the first time cause I was not in my element followed by 40000 afterwards, I noticed there's different dialogue for each so I was wondering if I hit the best dialogue or if I need to go further. great game, yes I will say it again, I will watch over your future endeavors with great excitement, thank you.
i was just tryna find something to pass the time because I can't sleep and honestly this was way more of a gem than it needed to be big props on the story ngl (also art was amazing too)
I think ive been trolled by the last image on the blog thing with Hilda and Rosa. I would assume that the other two clickable things on the map are just red herrings?
Those were actually just me playing with things and I forgot to remove them. I have a rough idea of a hilda and rosa thing but for now they just show up in A New Dawn.
Well, dang. Ah well. Best of luck for the new update- hopefully it wont be like the current state of Terraria mods (i love your work, and take your time)
What I expected it to be: A small game with a simple story, if any at all.
What I got: A game with very nice art, and a genuinely good story that started off simple but gradually evolved into something much more, and genuinely left me quite upset when it abruptly ended right as it started getting real good.
In the short time that I played this I've grown attached to Roxie and would love a continuation of her story, even though I know that'll never happen.
Hey, there's nothing to be sorry about! That just means you made a great game, and I'm surely looking forward to more in the future! (Assuming there will be more) ^^"
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Good morning. I wanted to congratulate you on the work accomplished so far, it's incredible.
However, one question bothers me:
There is an image depicting Hilda and Rosa, chatting with the protagonist. Anyone know how to get this scene?
Still in development.
Who do you plan to do beyond the four shown?
Juniper/Bianca/Fennel?
Elesa and Skyla?
Anthea and Concordia?
I'd ask about Lenora but... yeah I understand not wanting to touch the lady associated with the mammy stereotype with a ten foot pole, even if she's cool... and she has a loving husband too unlike all the others here lmao.
Nothing really planned after next. Skyla Elesa is most likely but idk.
Fair enough!
I came here to thank those involved in this game, especially the scriptwriter, the game's dialogues are very cute and have a lot of personality. I also apologize for my poor English, this game and the previous one about Dawn, which I look forward to a sequel to, made me try to understand more English, which is not my Native language, I think in the end this is yet another proof of how much I admire the work of this incredible team!!!! (Ps: I would also like to say that the game's arts are very good and I love them!)
Thanks, friend :D Glad you liked it despite the language barrier. What's your native language?
I made a account just to say that like... holy your stories, and writing skill here made me feel like I was listening to a actual conversation between 2 people, ESPECIALLY with uh... Roxie. I definitely plan to try any other games you release on here. Super excited for them as well.
Thanks friend :> I make sure to have conversations with the people I keep in my basement for that authentic feel.
just played through this last night and i blame you for the absolutely MASSIVE crush i now have on shauntal. please tell me there's more with her coming up
It's not impossible, but not something I'm currently working on.
However I regret to inform you that she is currently married to me.
I replayed the Roxie story last night. Still holds up. I'm addicted to Tetris-style games, so I was lost in that section for about a half-hour.
Thanks, you're my favorite customer
Shauntal episode was my favorite of your works so far, though the ending left me hoping for more. If you ever do any sort of continuation, I'd most like to see another chapter with her. In particular, the initial premise made me hope it would be both of them playing together more so, with them having lewd things build up in response to what their characters do in their game. Something that now after reading, wouldn't have felt appropriate for the current point their relationship was at, but now would. Regardless, it was cool stuff, cute story.
Thanks bro <3
I stayed up over 2 hours to play through the Shauntal story, past 5 AM as I type this. Loved the story, hoped that the NSFW stuff would at least be at the level of Roxie or top it. But none of that. It was still hot and the amount of work put into this is impressive and respectable. On the horny side, it was just a bit disappointing.
Yeah sorry I made the whole thing and then remembered it was supposed to be lewd.
soo far not bad, I would really like a guide for episode 2 when its finished as I do find it kind of confusing but still keep up the good work
This was fantastic, I loved the roleplay adventure! Shauntal is a fun character! Written well.
Though the ending was quite abrupt, it does end after the diary scene when she leaves, right? I didn't get a bad ending and am missing a bunch of stuff? That's my only real criticism, it's hard to tell.
Thanks mate :D
Yeah ends right there, there's only the one ending.
Is there only 1 nsfw scene for Shauntal?
Yeah, if you've seen one you've seen it all.
awww, she's so pretty though!
Correct
Do you have any strategies?
Got to the end on android worked perfectly fine
Nice
Why are you so aggressively determined to ruin my sleep schedule by being one of the best character writers I've ever seen, period, let alone for 18+ visual novels I play before bed?
Between this and A New Dawn, you're one of a scarce few writers that makes me feel like Ren'Py can be pushed beyond the limits of what it seems like on the tin. I look forward to playing your games so much that I unironically dropped a reflexive "Let's gooooo!" OUT LOUD when I saw the update pop up in my feed. THAT'S how good this shit is.
12/10 keep going
Only 12? Dang sorry next game cancelled
HOLYSHIT EP 2!
Can't believe is out letsgoooo
Great work, these are super fun
Thank you for doing my favorite gen 5 girl it was a fun story/game.
Fellow scaper? :)
Hah, yeah. What gave it away?
First thing I noticed was the name Thessalia (best Varrock NPC) but it is a name that could have been used elsewhere so that might be a coincidence as well as the mention of Herblore since I don't see that used too often.
When I saw the drink names that was the dead giveaway/reference haha.
Yeah there's a few things sprinkled in there. Someone stole 500m from me last year so I haven't played since.
What are the controls for tetris here?
Should just be arrow keys I think. Just press random buttons until it works.
That's what I was doing, but iirc I had trouble rotating the pieces. Is that the up and down buttons?
Yeah up arrow rotates, down arrow speeds it up.
…God damn it. Ah well, will do that tonight.
…so uh, will there be impreg?
Probably not sorry <_<
about to try the new update im exited but random side note where do the get the music from the bar in chapter 1 its fire
https://www.fesliyanstudios.com/royalty-free-music/download/anger/495
I regularly indulge in visual novels. This one's still amazing.
I rarely indulge in visual novels. This one's amazing.
Nice, thanks bud :>
Will there be impreg?
Can I have free robux
sure
The Tetris minigame is broken on android, there's no way to move the pieces besides rotating them
Can't really help with that unfortunately, I have no ability to test for android.
Understandable, at the end it really didn't impact getting the best ending.
Also, both of your VNs were genuinely good, really looking forward to Episode 2 on this one, take all the time you need to drop it.
Fun fact: I have never played Tetris before the minigame in this VN. I booted up the game because I already knew it was gold, and my save was at the minigame.
I just spent three hours learning how to actually play Tetris because I wanted to see more of the godlike dialogue writing in this game. 11/10
Damn i just realized u the one who created the "A New Dawn" too I'm definitely tryin this game man
Typo during hot dog scene. I've barely had a second to pause and consider how ATTACTED I am to her.
Followed by "lavendar" instead of "lavender".
Sorry game sucks
Bahahahaha. Jokes aside, I truly enjoyed this one. Far more than I expected. You've done a fantastic job.
What a good game but I need to now what is the song that is played in the gym I looked at the website but I can't find it please if someone can help me I would be really glad
When you're approaching the gym, or the background one when you're talking to roxie?
When you talking to her
https://www.fesliyanstudios.com/royalty-free-music/download/anger/495
Thank you so much!!!
I can't believe you made another amazing VA after Dawn! This one was much shorter but it seems like you plan on extending it with further episodes. I absolutely love your work and can't wait for the next part!
peak
pretty cute.
More than half of what is in the images in itch is not in the game
Yep, it's in development.
I wasn't expecting you to top Dawn with such a short VN, especially featuring a character I had almost no connection with, but somehow you did it. Hanging out with virtual Roxie and talking about stuff almost was more fun than eventually getting to the "good part". Came for the action (again), stayed for the character.
Seriously, I haven't met any person who was able to get me that invested with what is basically fan fiction. Really really looking forward to what you have in store with Shauntal!
Roxie isn't virtual she is real and she is my girlfriend
Hey VNAnon, I'm curious about something. Lately, there have been rumors that Gamefreak may actually be working on Pokemon Black 3 & White 3. Which if true, most likely means that there will be a new male and a new female protagonist for the games. So if all of this is true and happens, would you add the new female protagonist to the game alongside Hilda and Rosa? And on that note, would you also consider adding any attractive female characters that are new from this potential Black 3 & White 3? In general, I'm just wondering what your opinion on this is and what you would do if Pokemon Black 3 & White 3 actually happened. So, your thoughts?
Well I'll need to see the characters first. Who knows what cutie pies await us?
i cant put into words how i feel
i got fuckin tears in my eyes i just feel hollow
roxies talk on the pier was so much man i came here to look at some boobs cause im a shallow motherfucker i just feel sad
like ive been told i need to get up from the dirt floor that is my life and that there is hope
I believe in you, friend :>
Seriously one of the most adorable games i have played keep up the good work
Thanks best friend :D
This was so good that I made an account on itch.io just to compliment it, Like man, that was the sweetest and most wholesome stuff I've seen followed by some of the hottest stuff I've scene. massive props that was amazing, the art was great, the dialogue was great, and the tetris was great, thank you for adding tetris, I like tetris. I am very excited for your next work and I also realized you made "A New Dawn", a game I will surely check out later, great stuff, excited for more. also is there more dialogue depending on your tetris score? I got 4000 the first time cause I was not in my element followed by 40000 afterwards, I noticed there's different dialogue for each so I was wondering if I hit the best dialogue or if I need to go further. great game, yes I will say it again, I will watch over your future endeavors with great excitement, thank you.
Wow, thanks friend <3 I think 10,000 is the highest score that has different dialogue so you got it with 40k.
A second banger and this game not even done yet
i was just tryna find something to pass the time because I can't sleep and honestly this was way more of a gem than it needed to be big props on the story ngl (also art was amazing too)
Sleep well D:
hahaahaha i try i try i promise lol
Maybe take a walk and meet a cute punk girl?
life goals right there
I think ive been trolled by the last image on the blog thing with Hilda and Rosa. I would assume that the other two clickable things on the map are just red herrings?
Those were actually just me playing with things and I forgot to remove them. I have a rough idea of a hilda and rosa thing but for now they just show up in A New Dawn.
Well, dang. Ah well. Best of luck for the new update- hopefully it wont be like the current state of Terraria mods
(i love your work, and take your time)
Isn't terraria in its 8th annual final update or something
nah, im talking about the calamity mod and the fact that the 1.4.4 update has been kicking its ass. Too complicated for my brain to comprehend
What I expected it to be: A small game with a simple story, if any at all.
What I got: A game with very nice art, and a genuinely good story that started off simple but gradually evolved into something much more, and genuinely left me quite upset when it abruptly ended right as it started getting real good.
In the short time that I played this I've grown attached to Roxie and would love a continuation of her story, even though I know that'll never happen.
Sorry to upset :c
Hey, there's nothing to be sorry about! That just means you made a great game, and I'm surely looking forward to more in the future! (Assuming there will be more) ^^"
No, episode 2 is cancelled because you made me cry
...There's no way you're serious
;____; cant hear you over my tears