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Can I have free robux

sure

The Tetris minigame is broken on android, there's no way to move the pieces besides rotating them

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Can't really help with that unfortunately, I have no ability to test for android.

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Understandable, at the end it really didn't impact getting the best ending.

Also, both of your VNs were genuinely good, really looking forward to Episode 2 on this one, take all the time you need to drop it.

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Fun fact: I have never played Tetris before the minigame in this VN. I booted up the game because I already knew it was gold, and my save was at the minigame.

I just spent three hours learning how to actually play Tetris because I wanted to see more of the godlike dialogue writing in this game. 11/10

Damn i just realized u the one who created the "A New Dawn" too I'm definitely tryin this game man

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Typo during hot dog scene. I've barely had a second to pause and consider how ATTACTED I am to her.

Followed by "lavendar" instead of "lavender".

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Sorry game sucks

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Bahahahaha. Jokes aside, I truly enjoyed this one. Far more than I expected. You've done a fantastic job.

What a good game but I need to now what is the song that is played in the gym I looked at the website but I can't find it please if someone can help me I would be really glad

When you're approaching the gym, or the background one when you're talking to roxie?

When you talking to her

https://www.fesliyanstudios.com/royalty-free-music/download/anger/495

Thank you so much!!! 

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I can't believe you made another amazing VA after Dawn! This one was much shorter but it seems like you plan on extending it with further episodes. I absolutely love your work and can't wait for the next part!

peak

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pretty cute.

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More than half of what is in the images in itch is not in the game

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Yep, it's in development.

I wasn't expecting you to top Dawn with such a short VN, especially featuring a character I had almost no connection with, but somehow you did it. Hanging out with virtual Roxie and talking about stuff almost was more fun than eventually getting to the "good part". Came for the action (again), stayed for the character.

Seriously, I haven't met any person who was able to get me that invested with what is basically fan fiction. Really really looking forward to what you have in store with Shauntal!

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Roxie isn't virtual she is real and she is my girlfriend

Hey VNAnon, I'm curious about something. Lately, there have been rumors that Gamefreak may actually be working on Pokemon Black 3 & White 3. Which if true, most likely means that there will be a new male and a new female protagonist for the games. So if all of this is true and happens, would you add the new female protagonist to the game alongside Hilda and Rosa? And on that note, would you also consider adding any attractive female characters that are new from this potential Black 3 & White 3? In general, I'm just wondering what your opinion on this is and what you would do if Pokemon Black 3 & White 3 actually happened. So, your thoughts?

Well I'll need to see the characters first. Who knows what cutie pies await us?

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i cant put into words how i feel


i got fuckin tears in my eyes i just feel hollow


roxies talk on the pier was so much man i came here to look at some boobs cause im a shallow motherfucker i just feel sad 


like ive been told i need to get up from the dirt floor that is my life and that there is hope

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I believe in you, friend :>

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Seriously one of the most adorable games i have played keep up the good work 

Thanks best friend :D

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This was so good that I made an account on itch.io just to compliment it, Like man, that was the sweetest and most wholesome stuff I've seen followed by some of the hottest stuff I've scene. massive props that was amazing, the art was great, the dialogue was great, and the tetris was great, thank you for adding tetris, I like tetris. I am very excited for your next work and I also realized you made "A New Dawn", a game I will surely check out later, great stuff, excited for more. also is there more dialogue depending on your tetris score? I got 4000 the first time cause I was not in my element followed by 40000 afterwards, I noticed there's different dialogue for each so I was wondering if I hit the best dialogue or if I need to go further. great game, yes I will say it again, I will watch over your future endeavors with great excitement, thank you.

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Wow, thanks friend <3 I think 10,000 is the highest score that has different dialogue so you got it with 40k.

A second banger and this game not even done yet

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i was just tryna find something to pass the time because I can't sleep and honestly this was way more of a gem than it needed to be big props on the story ngl (also art was amazing too)

Sleep well D:

hahaahaha i try i try i promise lol

Maybe take a walk and meet a cute punk girl?

life goals right there

I think ive been trolled by the last image on the blog thing with Hilda and Rosa. I would assume that the other two clickable things on the map are just red herrings?

Those were actually just me playing with things and I forgot to remove them. I have a rough idea of a hilda and rosa thing but for now they just show up in A New Dawn.

Well, dang. Ah well. Best of luck for the new update- hopefully it wont be like the current state of Terraria mods
(i love your work, and take your time)

Isn't terraria in its 8th annual final update or something

nah, im talking about the calamity mod and the fact that the 1.4.4 update has been kicking its ass. Too complicated for my brain to comprehend

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What I expected it to be: A small game with a simple story, if any at all. 

What I got: A game with very nice art, and a genuinely good story that started off simple but gradually evolved into something much more, and genuinely left me quite upset when it abruptly ended right as it started getting real good.

In the short time that I played this I've grown attached to Roxie and would love a continuation of her story, even though I know that'll never happen.

Sorry to upset :c

Hey, there's nothing to be sorry about! That just means you made a great game, and I'm surely looking forward to more in the future! (Assuming there will be more) ^^"

No, episode 2 is cancelled because you made me cry

...There's no way you're serious

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;____; cant hear you over my tears

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Honestly, pretty damn good. Sure, I was drawn in by the adult tag, but after playing it, it falls into that special category of "VNs I like even without the porn". I shall watch your future endeavors with great interest. 

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Downloaded for the porn, stayed for the incredible characterization, immersive worldbuilding, engaging dialogue, and commentary on passion and purpose that made me feel directly targeted as an individual. 11/10, if you're scrolling down to the comments to see if you'll like the game, you will.

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Jeez, thanks friend :>

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I had a crush on Roxie my first playthrough when I was around 8-11, after playing this it feels like I've finished a small chapter of my childhood. On the same day I get excepted to my dream college no less. 

Thanks game devs, I hope you have nothing but good days, and that you tell everything else to f off.

Hey, congrats friend :D

I was a really good visual novel. Love the references to the other regions and It's great that we can hear more about Roxie. Can't wait for the story with Hilda and Rosa.

Hello. I loved what I played and am wondering if you will do a full VN for Roxie in the future? Keep up the great work!

Just doing small ones for now, but nothing's impossible.

Thank you for replying. I am a big fan of Roxie. I look forward to your future works.

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Very cute game. Loved the little story. Keep up the good work!

this is another master piece good job 

Was very well made. How are you planning on topping Roxie though?

Idk, it's impossible.

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Was fluffy, many thanks for the experience.

I'm fluffy c: 

One thing I hope you consider is possibly doing mini-episodes with Roxie or whatever character in the future when you drop a new chapter. Something just short, sweet, maybe to the point or something romantic. Would be a shame if that was the last we see of Roxie, or even Dawn.

Off to a great start. Episode One may have been a tad on the short side, but it was full of cute moments and the connection between Roxie and the player character felt really genuine. Can't wait for more! But man, fuck Porygon Pileup. Goddamn line pieces never showin' up when I need 'em.

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Hey, I designed and tested that brand new game and it's perfect, fuck you

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Probably a skill issue

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Great first chapter!

As the wise words of the Unova map says, "u fucked roza!"

Wait did I forget to remove that

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No. I am in your walls.

Oh cool nvm then

I'm trying to play the game but it get stuck in the intro when Roxie stars to talk.  There is audio, but the text doesn't advance past that.

Gotta click the city next to the name. I probably should have thought the map screen out more.

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5 stars! Super duper amazing! If you end up making more I can't wait

I don't see a Download link?

It's not done yet

my bad man. 

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Holy shit, My fav VN creator is back with a new VN, I'm excited.

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Who is he

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You : )

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:OOOOOOOOO

Good game... me smell it...

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Yes I finally made time and have gone through this game. And as such can confirm....


GOOD GAEM! ME LIKE!

thAnk

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Holy shit, after all the teasing.

I've been waiting for this! 

Don't know how to feel about being more excited for this than S/V

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Oh no

Well prepare to be underwhelmed

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You're gonna have to try hard to underwhelm me more than Game freak did!

hahaha

ha

...

:c

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*violently spits out drink*

yes

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Please clean that up sir

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Sorry

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hell ya looking good im exited for them

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