I'd ask about Lenora but... yeah I understand not wanting to touch the lady associated with the mammy stereotype with a ten foot pole, even if she's cool... and she has a loving husband too unlike all the others here lmao.
I came here to thank those involved in this game, especially the scriptwriter, the game's dialogues are very cute and have a lot of personality. I also apologize for my poor English, this game and the previous one about Dawn, which I look forward to a sequel to, made me try to understand more English, which is not my Native language, I think in the end this is yet another proof of how much I admire the work of this incredible team!!!! (Ps: I would also like to say that the game's arts are very good and I love them!)
I made a account just to say that like... holy your stories, and writing skill here made me feel like I was listening to a actual conversation between 2 people, ESPECIALLY with uh... Roxie. I definitely plan to try any other games you release on here. Super excited for them as well.
just played through this last night and i blame you for the absolutely MASSIVE crush i now have on shauntal. please tell me there's more with her coming up
Shauntal episode was my favorite of your works so far, though the ending left me hoping for more. If you ever do any sort of continuation, I'd most like to see another chapter with her. In particular, the initial premise made me hope it would be both of them playing together more so, with them having lewd things build up in response to what their characters do in their game. Something that now after reading, wouldn't have felt appropriate for the current point their relationship was at, but now would. Regardless, it was cool stuff, cute story.
I stayed up over 2 hours to play through the Shauntal story, past 5 AM as I type this. Loved the story, hoped that the NSFW stuff would at least be at the level of Roxie or top it. But none of that. It was still hot and the amount of work put into this is impressive and respectable. On the horny side, it was just a bit disappointing.
This was fantastic, I loved the roleplay adventure! Shauntal is a fun character! Written well.
Though the ending was quite abrupt, it does end after the diary scene when she leaves, right? I didn't get a bad ending and am missing a bunch of stuff? That's my only real criticism, it's hard to tell.
Why are you so aggressively determined to ruin my sleep schedule by being one of the best character writers I've ever seen, period, let alone for 18+ visual novels I play before bed?
Between this and A New Dawn, you're one of a scarce few writers that makes me feel like Ren'Py can be pushed beyond the limits of what it seems like on the tin. I look forward to playing your games so much that I unironically dropped a reflexive "Let's gooooo!" OUT LOUD when I saw the update pop up in my feed. THAT'S how good this shit is.
First thing I noticed was the name Thessalia (best Varrock NPC) but it is a name that could have been used elsewhere so that might be a coincidence as well as the mention of Herblore since I don't see that used too often.
When I saw the drink names that was the dead giveaway/reference haha.
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Do you know when part 3 will be finished
Good morning. I wanted to congratulate you on the work accomplished so far, it's incredible.
However, one question bothers me:
There is an image depicting Hilda and Rosa, chatting with the protagonist. Anyone know how to get this scene?
Still in development.
Who do you plan to do beyond the four shown?
Juniper/Bianca/Fennel?
Elesa and Skyla?
Anthea and Concordia?
I'd ask about Lenora but... yeah I understand not wanting to touch the lady associated with the mammy stereotype with a ten foot pole, even if she's cool... and she has a loving husband too unlike all the others here lmao.
Nothing really planned after next. Skyla Elesa is most likely but idk.
Fair enough!
I came here to thank those involved in this game, especially the scriptwriter, the game's dialogues are very cute and have a lot of personality. I also apologize for my poor English, this game and the previous one about Dawn, which I look forward to a sequel to, made me try to understand more English, which is not my Native language, I think in the end this is yet another proof of how much I admire the work of this incredible team!!!! (Ps: I would also like to say that the game's arts are very good and I love them!)
Thanks, friend :D Glad you liked it despite the language barrier. What's your native language?
I made a account just to say that like... holy your stories, and writing skill here made me feel like I was listening to a actual conversation between 2 people, ESPECIALLY with uh... Roxie. I definitely plan to try any other games you release on here. Super excited for them as well.
Thanks friend :> I make sure to have conversations with the people I keep in my basement for that authentic feel.
just played through this last night and i blame you for the absolutely MASSIVE crush i now have on shauntal. please tell me there's more with her coming up
It's not impossible, but not something I'm currently working on.
However I regret to inform you that she is currently married to me.
I replayed the Roxie story last night. Still holds up. I'm addicted to Tetris-style games, so I was lost in that section for about a half-hour.
Thanks, you're my favorite customer
Shauntal episode was my favorite of your works so far, though the ending left me hoping for more. If you ever do any sort of continuation, I'd most like to see another chapter with her. In particular, the initial premise made me hope it would be both of them playing together more so, with them having lewd things build up in response to what their characters do in their game. Something that now after reading, wouldn't have felt appropriate for the current point their relationship was at, but now would. Regardless, it was cool stuff, cute story.
Thanks bro <3
I stayed up over 2 hours to play through the Shauntal story, past 5 AM as I type this. Loved the story, hoped that the NSFW stuff would at least be at the level of Roxie or top it. But none of that. It was still hot and the amount of work put into this is impressive and respectable. On the horny side, it was just a bit disappointing.
Yeah sorry I made the whole thing and then remembered it was supposed to be lewd.
soo far not bad, I would really like a guide for episode 2 when its finished as I do find it kind of confusing but still keep up the good work
This was fantastic, I loved the roleplay adventure! Shauntal is a fun character! Written well.
Though the ending was quite abrupt, it does end after the diary scene when she leaves, right? I didn't get a bad ending and am missing a bunch of stuff? That's my only real criticism, it's hard to tell.
Thanks mate :D
Yeah ends right there, there's only the one ending.
Is there only 1 nsfw scene for Shauntal?
Yeah, if you've seen one you've seen it all.
awww, she's so pretty though!
Correct
Do you have any strategies?
Got to the end on android worked perfectly fine
Nice
Why are you so aggressively determined to ruin my sleep schedule by being one of the best character writers I've ever seen, period, let alone for 18+ visual novels I play before bed?
Between this and A New Dawn, you're one of a scarce few writers that makes me feel like Ren'Py can be pushed beyond the limits of what it seems like on the tin. I look forward to playing your games so much that I unironically dropped a reflexive "Let's gooooo!" OUT LOUD when I saw the update pop up in my feed. THAT'S how good this shit is.
12/10 keep going
Only 12? Dang sorry next game cancelled
HOLYSHIT EP 2!
Can't believe is out letsgoooo
Great work, these are super fun
Thank you for doing my favorite gen 5 girl it was a fun story/game.
Fellow scaper? :)
Hah, yeah. What gave it away?
First thing I noticed was the name Thessalia (best Varrock NPC) but it is a name that could have been used elsewhere so that might be a coincidence as well as the mention of Herblore since I don't see that used too often.
When I saw the drink names that was the dead giveaway/reference haha.
Yeah there's a few things sprinkled in there. Someone stole 500m from me last year so I haven't played since.
What are the controls for tetris here?
Should just be arrow keys I think. Just press random buttons until it works.
That's what I was doing, but iirc I had trouble rotating the pieces. Is that the up and down buttons?
Yeah up arrow rotates, down arrow speeds it up.
…God damn it. Ah well, will do that tonight.
…so uh, will there be impreg?
Probably not sorry <_<
about to try the new update im exited but random side note where do the get the music from the bar in chapter 1 its fire
https://www.fesliyanstudios.com/royalty-free-music/download/anger/495
I regularly indulge in visual novels. This one's still amazing.
I rarely indulge in visual novels. This one's amazing.
Nice, thanks bud :>
Will there be impreg?