This game was amazing honestly I will be playing it again because dawn was just one of my favorite characters from the show and I just wanted to see what it would be like to battle and talk to her it honestly made me a little happy but the ending threw me off a little I would pay a lot of money for a part 2 or something so please is you're reading this the person who made this if you're reading this please at least put it consideration for a part 2 I bet it would make a lot of people including me happy
Does anyone know where I can find a list or website for more visual novels? I was lucky that I happened to come across this amazing visual novel and am looking for more just general pokemon visual novels
how do you win the battle against Dawn after the contest? I won the contest so I should have enough points right? the walkthrough doesn't explain how to win the battle
Hm, as far as I remember, the different things you decide to do with her in the coop battle can give you an edge in the last one. I honestly can't fully remember though.
This was a 10/10 to game and I wish that there was more to the story especially the ending where you go with Dawn on journeys and if you make the front decisions you can have sex with and all that but it's up to y'all just want to say that the game is great and I was kinda of sad that it ended
Hello! as there been any updates or progress to this? Just asking, I know you have been working on the new visual novel but would absolutely love to see this
wait you can? i still loved the ending i got but i was hoping for a kiss and relationship. how do I get the ending? do i have to follow the walkthrough but with lewd off?
I was promised wholesome and cute and thats exactly what i got, you did a amazing job, I even played the short 5 minutes part (i hope it is a teaser for a bigger project :3).
I really like the tone of the story, you manage to immerse the reader by making the main protagonist relatable and kind of shy and quirky, his chemistry with Dawn is adorable and it makes playing the game a really lighthearted and fun experience.
I also like that you didnt put bad endings or mean decisions in the game, i'm not against suffering the consequences for your actions in a visual novel but it is kinda sad when i have to choose the bad decisions to finish a game100% XD.
Again, nice job! Hope you have more prepared for us : D
Yeah I hear a lot about bad ends and how visual novels are all supposed to have them but it's just not what I was going for, this is happy happy fantasy fulfillment and everything goes perfect, Dawn loves you too much for there to be bad ends.
It's not like I haven't thought up a whole Unova adventure with Dawn but these things really take a lot more work and money than I expected. I can see making a sequel but the fact that I've taken over a year to make anything since this and it's turning out even shorter makes me wonder how long it'll be. Maybe when everyone's forgotten about it I'll come out with something.
And since the MC is a self-insert I'll take this as "I would be a perfect boyfriend for Dawn", so thank you and I agree.
This game is amazing, it is to me, the best love story i have ever played/read.
I can also kind of relate to the mc on some parts.
also this might be weird but most visual novels i don't read through, I just like looking at the art and the characters, but this is the first vn I read through and went back for more alternative parts of the story.
Really good, enjoyed the writing immensely. Would love some more story of progressing through Unova/getting ready for another event even if it just reuses artwork
Finished my first run, and I'm shocked to find something this fluffy and wholesome from 4chan of all places. While I never watched the Sinnoh anime, Dawn's particular form of infectious confidence and the choice between focusing on the contest (which I did, because I grinded the shit out of contests in Ruby) or the date sim was a smart move, given the grievance about unrealistic love.
Though I am a bit sad that the epilogue doesn't show anything of Cynthia after all the build up for her, especially given how funny Hilda and Rosa were (both with each other and with Dawn), I understand wanting to make it feel condensed. The time skips do feel a little jarring, but not distractingly so. Just kinda comes off as a "proof of concept" for what might come next. Though with them palling around in Unova, it does make me wonder if there's gonna be an Easter egg for this in the Roxie VN. Though maybe that's me just having a poisoned brain and thinking back to the secret epilogues in Kingdom Hearts, lol.
MC does come off as a creepy weirdo to me, but in a "oh Arceus someone is talking to me what do I do" sense. It makes the juxtaposition with Scyther funny. I can see why someone as extroverted as Dawn would end up "adopting" him, so to speak. Not sure how to feel about his inner thoughts basically just being a tame version of /dg/, but I appreciate wanting the affection levels to be mutual.
My only major problem with the VN, aside from some gripes with the art that I feel like fixes are already in the works, is just a reoccurring thought I had while playing. If Dawn ranked second in a contest so prestigious that even our dopey MC was aware of, why does nobody recognize her?
Maybe this is brought up in another route. I've only done one route, and I will come back and add on to this after I've taken time to explore the game more.
I would've loved to do more Cynthia stuff but art was already hard to come by so I didn't want to do much with that. It'd be top of the list to flesh out if my artist was available, which alas, he hasn't been for some time so I can't do too much new stuff at the moment.
That's a fair gripe, I guess. I probably could have added it in here and there, but I figure it would've got old if it kept happening.
There's not a whole lotta difference between "routes", just new directions to the same thing. Spoiler warning, there's no bad ending, because as I said fluffy and wholesome etc.
Thanks for the review though, I'm always happy to read people's thoughts :3
I will literally invest for you to do a continuation of this. I had my doubts at first but my god this was hands down the best VN ive read is a long time. Im dead ass serious about investing for a continuation
I think it says there's an update any time I do anything, even the smallest change. Specifically this was me adding the ko-fi link. I'd make a post if it was anything significant.
And it's probably not the end. I'd like to try and do some stuff for different girls here and there but dawn is still gonna be my favorite. These things take a lot of time and work though so nothing in the works right now.
I don't, unfortunately. Not sure it'd gain enough traction at the moment, might make one if I ever release a second project. I post a bit on my twitter if you wanted to give that a follow.
I'm having trouble with the android version. I download the APK file, but it's not working. I'm able to do it with other apks, just not this one. Anyone know a fix?
I really don't know a thing about the android version, I basically just clicked the buttons to make the file. It's seemed to work for other people though so I really can't offer much help, sorry.
This would probably be very hard to impossible but I think it would be cool to have a sequel to this as an RPG where you explore the new region. It's probably a lot harder to make an RPG than a visual novel, so I understand if it wouldn't happen. I really like this game though and would like to see more, even if there's another visual novel sequel, that would be very nice.
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This game was amazing honestly I will be playing it again because dawn was just one of my favorite characters from the show and I just wanted to see what it would be like to battle and talk to her it honestly made me a little happy but the ending threw me off a little I would pay a lot of money for a part 2 or something so please is you're reading this the person who made this if you're reading this please at least put it consideration for a part 2 I bet it would make a lot of people including me happy
Maybe some day
Man I don't even watch Pokemon but this VN now tempting me to watch the show just so I can see Dawn again AGHHHHHH I WANT MORE DAMMIT
I'm going to have a severe Dawn withdrawal from this... I can already feel it.
Ooh boy that's got some rough symptoms too. I prescribe one Dawn smooch morning afternoon and evening.
Honestly I wish there was more to this game. Perfect storyline I was kinda disappointed when it ended. 10/10 would recommend.
Does anyone know where I can find a list or website for more visual novels? I was lucky that I happened to come across this amazing visual novel and am looking for more just general pokemon visual novels
hey just have a question
how do you win the battle against Dawn after the contest? I won the contest so I should have enough points right? the walkthrough doesn't explain how to win the battle
Hm, as far as I remember, the different things you decide to do with her in the coop battle can give you an edge in the last one. I honestly can't fully remember though.
Ah okay, do you know what choices in the last battle I have to make in order to win?
Oh god i really don't remember, I think if you do the tag team surf on piplup's wave you have an advantage when he whirlpools you in the last battle.
yeah youre right, i managed to get it. Thanks!
This was a 10/10 to game and I wish that there was more to the story especially the ending where you go with Dawn on journeys and if you make the front decisions you can have sex with and all that but it's up to y'all just want to say that the game is great and I was kinda of sad that it ended
这是一款很棒的游戏，我想知道游戏是否会继续更新，谢谢
Truly a wonderful VN. Very wholesome, 10/10 would play again (and did!).
you know, i would love to see this in Dawn's POV
just to see her thoughts and such
again incredible work here, i love this so so much :)
I thought about trying that, might add it at some point.
yes that would be amazing! would be really cute :)
Hello! as there been any updates or progress to this? Just asking, I know you have been working on the new visual novel but would absolutely love to see this
No plans right now, sorry.
Oh ok, is there plans in the future after your current work? Along with 1.1 possibly?
how do i get the lewd ending also the game was amazing lost track of time trying to fill out the art gallery
There's a walkthrough in the dev log
ok thank you
This. Is. AMAZING
I loved Dawn so much, so this is exactly what I've been looking for, for years
On top of that, you did an amazing job with this
It's so good, so well done and a fun story
Only thing, is there anyway for me to get together with Dawn without the lewd?
I'm not that interested in the lewd stuff, I want a pure fluff romance
Either way fantastic job, amazing work thank you!
You can turn lewdness off in the options. Then it's just smoochin' :>
wait you can? i still loved the ending i got but i was hoping for a kiss and relationship. how do I get the ending? do i have to follow the walkthrough but with lewd off?
With lewdness off it just skips the adult scenes, it should be all the same.
Ah okay that's great! One thing I hope gets added is more dating scenes
Like more scenes once you get into an official relationship
I was promised wholesome and cute and thats exactly what i got, you did a amazing job, I even played the short 5 minutes part (i hope it is a teaser for a bigger project :3).
I really like the tone of the story, you manage to immerse the reader by making the main protagonist relatable and kind of shy and quirky, his chemistry with Dawn is adorable and it makes playing the game a really lighthearted and fun experience.
I also like that you didnt put bad endings or mean decisions in the game, i'm not against suffering the consequences for your actions in a visual novel but it is kinda sad when i have to choose the bad decisions to finish a game100% XD.
Again, nice job! Hope you have more prepared for us : D
Thanks, friend <3 Glad you liked it.
Yeah I hear a lot about bad ends and how visual novels are all supposed to have them but it's just not what I was going for, this is happy happy fantasy fulfillment and everything goes perfect, Dawn loves you too much for there to be bad ends.
It's not like I haven't thought up a whole Unova adventure with Dawn but these things really take a lot more work and money than I expected. I can see making a sequel but the fact that I've taken over a year to make anything since this and it's turning out even shorter makes me wonder how long it'll be. Maybe when everyone's forgotten about it I'll come out with something.
And since the MC is a self-insert I'll take this as "I would be a perfect boyfriend for Dawn", so thank you and I agree.
This game is amazing, it is to me, the best love story i have ever played/read.
I can also kind of relate to the mc on some parts.
also this might be weird but most visual novels i don't read through, I just like looking at the art and the characters, but this is the first vn I read through and went back for more alternative parts of the story.
10/10 I'm about to read through it again
Wow, high praise :> Thanks friend
Really good, enjoyed the writing immensely. Would love some more story of progressing through Unova/getting ready for another event even if it just reuses artwork
0/10
that’s siegullion my pokemon oc
Finished my first run, and I'm shocked to find something this fluffy and wholesome from 4chan of all places. While I never watched the Sinnoh anime, Dawn's particular form of infectious confidence and the choice between focusing on the contest (which I did, because I grinded the shit out of contests in Ruby) or the date sim was a smart move, given the grievance about unrealistic love.
Though I am a bit sad that the epilogue doesn't show anything of Cynthia after all the build up for her, especially given how funny Hilda and Rosa were (both with each other and with Dawn), I understand wanting to make it feel condensed. The time skips do feel a little jarring, but not distractingly so. Just kinda comes off as a "proof of concept" for what might come next. Though with them palling around in Unova, it does make me wonder if there's gonna be an Easter egg for this in the Roxie VN.
Though maybe that's me just having a poisoned brain and thinking back to the secret epilogues in Kingdom Hearts, lol.MC does come off as a creepy weirdo to me, but in a "oh Arceus someone is talking to me what do I do" sense. It makes the juxtaposition with Scyther funny. I can see why someone as extroverted as Dawn would end up "adopting" him, so to speak. Not sure how to feel about his inner thoughts basically just being a tame version of /dg/, but I appreciate wanting the affection levels to be mutual.
My only major problem with the VN, aside from some gripes with the art that I feel like fixes are already in the works, is just a reoccurring thought I had while playing. If Dawn ranked second in a contest so prestigious that even our dopey MC was aware of, why does nobody recognize her?
Maybe this is brought up in another route. I've only done one route, and I will come back and add on to this after I've taken time to explore the game more.
Fluffy and wholesome is my jam.
I would've loved to do more Cynthia stuff but art was already hard to come by so I didn't want to do much with that. It'd be top of the list to flesh out if my artist was available, which alas, he hasn't been for some time so I can't do too much new stuff at the moment.
That's a fair gripe, I guess. I probably could have added it in here and there, but I figure it would've got old if it kept happening.
There's not a whole lotta difference between "routes", just new directions to the same thing. Spoiler warning, there's no bad ending, because as I said fluffy and wholesome etc.
Thanks for the review though, I'm always happy to read people's thoughts :3
Also the MC is a self insert so I take offense whenever anyone rightfully points out he's weird so fuck you
This is a great game I just got the non lewd ending, made my heart melt, can't wait for more.
Thanks for making this game.
I've got to say, I really enjoyed playing this and I hope you can make a sequel/fandisc for it too.
Maybe we could finally see Dawn dressed up in other outfits like a cheerleader or a swimsuit.
Finished not lewd route, awesome!
Started again, hope to see it would got any updates in future or sequel\other dating game ;)
just played through the last update loved the improvements. you have done a wonderful job on this game will love to see what you make next!
Thanks friend <3
havent played yet but these comments make me hopeful for a high quality game, downloading it now
fingers crossed
Whenever someone posts something like this they always mysteriously don't post again ;__;
finally finished non lewd route and absolutely love it, sorry for taking my time tho
Hooray, glad to hear it :D
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Is this a romance? Can I choose a non-con route?
I will literally invest for you to do a continuation of this. I had my doubts at first but my god this was hands down the best VN ive read is a long time. Im dead ass serious about investing for a continuation
Aw, glad you liked it, friend :>
I, uhh, did just set up a ko-fi if you're so inclined. By no means required though.
I got you bud, give me a little time 🤙
Thank you darling <3 I really appreciate it, a special dawn smooch to you.
I noticed you did an update about 3 days ago, is there notes on that or was that just for this post?
Also, will there be more to this or is that it for dawn?
I think it says there's an update any time I do anything, even the smallest change. Specifically this was me adding the ko-fi link. I'd make a post if it was anything significant.
And it's probably not the end. I'd like to try and do some stuff for different girls here and there but dawn is still gonna be my favorite. These things take a lot of time and work though so nothing in the works right now.
is the apk version also 1.0 like the windows and mac versions?
They should all be the same, yeah.
S-tier
just finished my first playthrough of the game and was wondering if you had a discord or something of the sort .
I don't, unfortunately. Not sure it'd gain enough traction at the moment, might make one if I ever release a second project. I post a bit on my twitter if you wanted to give that a follow.
Hello,
I'm having trouble with the android version. I download the APK file, but it's not working. I'm able to do it with other apks, just not this one. Anyone know a fix?
I really don't know a thing about the android version, I basically just clicked the buttons to make the file. It's seemed to work for other people though so I really can't offer much help, sorry.
HELP, How do I get this scene?
I've been trying to get it for some time now and I STILL can't get it
You'll get that if your affection is high enough after the contest and you're not together yet.
The game was great, I loved just as much as i love Dawn, also quick question, will u be making other VNs for the other heroines in pokemon ?
I hope to. These take more time and resources than I expected so I don't know though.
I am GREATLY looking forward to the others then, also, keep up the AMAZING work
Hola alguien q me dé una guía de cómo obtener el final sin Escenas H porque ya lo saqué pero no puedo sacar el otro final gracias
aaaa this so Good!! but i need in spanish i dont understand english very well pe :,v
This would probably be very hard to impossible but I think it would be cool to have a sequel to this as an RPG where you explore the new region. It's probably a lot harder to make an RPG than a visual novel, so I understand if it wouldn't happen. I really like this game though and would like to see more, even if there's another visual novel sequel, that would be very nice.
Great job with the game and keep it up!
I think it would be cool too if in a sequel you pick what ending from this game you want to start with to have multiple paths.
That would be pretty cool but way beyond what I have the resources to do, unfortunately.
cant dl for some reason I turned off block popups, still I get nothing unfortunately
This so Good! Question will you make an after story of this novel?
It's possible. Working on original assets for this one currently, but when I've got all that done, who knows.
Can't wait 😁
I know I've commented here before but I was wondering how do I get the last 5 images from the art gallery?
They're from the lewd scenes, check out the walkthrough.
it didn't work
Do you have sexual content turned on?
yes so much so that I've already got the other photos that are just obscene
Small typo. I'd DM you on Twitter, but I'm suspended at the moment.
Oh cool I'll fix, thanks
i hate to say it, but i seen too manh vn games that have it, sooo.. will dis get a mobile support? xp
There's an android download, other than that, no.
pog, thx mate, wait.. where android version? :o
nvm i find it, thx mate, havent play it but 10/10 cuz dawn is actually my fav character in pokemon <3
I would like to know how I can release the H scenes I've tried to do a little of everything but it doesn't work, someone help me (╥﹏╥)
I still can't get the last five I've basically done everything vn has said to do in the past with other comments but I still have not gotten them.